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| PearShape || Causes lethargy, weight gain, and changes body fat distribution to make it more obvious || increased weight, decreased energy, increased perspiration || Uncontrolled weight gain, loss of muscle tone | | PearShape || Causes lethargy, weight gain, and changes body fat distribution to make it more obvious || increased weight, decreased energy, increased perspiration || Uncontrolled weight gain, loss of muscle tone | ||
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| SkinDeep || Causes acne and itching || Spreads to more parts of the body; for some subjects can mutate into an eczema-like rash || whole body covered with acne | | SkinDeep || Causes acne and itching || Spreads to more parts of the body; for some subjects can mutate into an eczema-like rash || whole body covered with acne | ||
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Revision as of 21:18, 7 July 2022
A Dose of Humiliation is a story which Kitty Angel started writing for Camp NaNoWriMo July 2022.
Characters
- Lorna Peen - narrator and main character, who is given an infantilising injections
- Marcie - Lorna's friend with excessive, overbearing parents
- Elspeth - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry.
- Serena Tong - older girl who befriended Elspeth in order to get close to Marcie because she has an obsessive fascination with the punishment pill and loves talking to people about their experiences
- Elspeth - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry.
- Jodie - Lorna's friend
- Nikki - Lorna's friend
- Lance - Nikki's boyfriend
- Marcie - Lorna's friend with excessive, overbearing parents
- Andy Becker - A local pharmacist who hates Lorna
- Todd Becker - A school bully who Lorna managed to outwit
- Clint Walsh - at school with Lorna; from Barbados originally, still has an accent, but his family have moved all over the world. Was beaten up by Todd's gang but won't give up on his dream to be a skateboarder
- Todd Becker - A school bully who Lorna managed to outwit
- Mrs Yuan - Owns a hat/accessory shop, "The Hat Trick". In the mall one level below Becker's pharmacy, just visible across the atrium. Several of her former assistants now run branches in other nearby towns.
Punishment Pill
There are 23 possible "doses" available, each of which is designed to humiliate the patient in a different way. They have a basic effect, as well as additional effects which can be added by giving the patient an 'intensity booster' shot. Intensity boosters can usually be stacked, making the same effect more intense. there is also an 'overloaded booster' effect, which is caused by giving an intensity booster while an existing booster (of any kind) is still acting on the body. By law, parents are required to keep track and leave 6 hours between boosters. These effects are also seen as the "final form" of a dose after repeatedly adding intensity boosters
Ones mentioned so far include:
| Dose name | Normal effect | Intensifier effect | Overloaded boosters |
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| Diffusion | Evolves nitrogen gas in the large intestine, causing frequent bloating and flatulence | Patient must pass gas more often, and may smell worse. In some patients may cause occasional diarrhea and nausea, and may sometimes cause accidents | near-constant involuntary flatulence and spontaneous (usually once or twice daily) incontinence |
| Floodgate | Causes sporadic bedwetting | Progressively weakens pelvic floor muscles, making accidents more likely with a full bladder | Complete loss of bladder control |
| Loquaciousness | Causes a lisp, which may make you hard to understand for some people | Less control of tongue and vocal folds; a growing speech impediment. For an hour or so after the booster, subjects may be unable to speak at all, but they can usually learn to be understood again with some effort | Unable to speak except in baby talk. Muscle interference changes randomly so there's no way to adapt to it |
| PearShape | Causes lethargy, weight gain, and changes body fat distribution to make it more obvious | increased weight, decreased energy, increased perspiration | Uncontrolled weight gain, loss of muscle tone |
| SkinDeep | Causes acne and itching | Spreads to more parts of the body; for some subjects can mutate into an eczema-like rash | whole body covered with acne |
I'll add others when I have time
