Hypnosis Doesn't Work Like That!/Timeline - Revision history

Angel: Fixing broken links

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LilJennie: /* First Act */

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‎First Act

LilJennie at 23:08, 16 September 2020

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Angel at 20:59, 6 February 2020

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Angel: /* Exam Period */

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Angel at 21:16, 12 January 2020

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Angel at 23:51, 10 January 2020

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Angel: /* Exam Period */

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 ** Needs to pee during an exam, but is embarrassed to ask to be excused, so allows herself to wet deliberately.
 *** First suggestion that she might be losing bladder control because she hasn't been able to hold it in a week.
-* [c283-285] '''Friday''' Adi wakes up early, manages to send a message to [[../Locke|Locke]] on [[Critical Mass]] explaining why she's been away. Tried to send Toni another email, but someone hears her moving.
+* [c283-285] '''Friday''' Adi wakes up early, manages to send a message to [[../../Locke|Locke]] on [[Critical Mass]] explaining why she's been away. Tried to send Toni another email, but someone hears her moving.
 ** Maths exam. Belle has trouble, Adi less so. Adi wets herself, realises her bladder's getting weaker.
 ** Adi speaks to Belle after the exam, asks her to pass on the message to Brit/Toni
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 ** [c320-304] Dean interrupts [[Toadshroom]]; asks Adi for her CritMass username. Gets his. Ashamed, thinks he might hate her if he reads more, so he triggers her to end the discussion. Later asks Brit too.
 * '''Saturday''' Toni's birthday. [c305 onwards]
-** Big trip to [[K-World]]. Adi, Brit, Toni, Dean, Lily, [[../Casey Dibble|Casey]] and [[../Riley Kwyn|Riley]]; a few of Toni's other friends, but they're not so close
+** Big trip to [[K-World]]. Adi, Brit, Toni, Dean, Lily, [[../../Casey Dibble|Casey]] and [[../../Riley Kwyn|Riley]]; a few of Toni's other friends, but they're not so close
 ==Exam Period (planned)==

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 * First week
 ** Tuesday night - listens to the file, first test. Chapters 1-9.
-** Wednesday - triggered by mom, then by Featherchase in school. Goes home with Toni
+** Wednesday - triggered by mom, then by Featherchase in school. Goes home with Toni. Chapters 10-21.
-** Thursday - triggered by Toni's dad on speakerphone. Tells friends. Triggered by Belle. Evening, gets book list from Brit and asks Mom to call her adi
+** Thursday - triggered by Toni's dad on speakerphone. Tells friends. Triggered by Belle. Evening, gets book list from Brit and asks Mom to call her Adi. Chapters 22-32.
-** Friday - triggered by Belle in the morning. Mom finds note. Sees Belle/Dean arguing at school. Triggered by Leatherface again
+** Friday - triggered by Belle in the morning. Mom finds note. Sees Belle/Dean arguing at school. Triggered by Leatherface again. Chapters 33-38.
-** Saturday - Mom cryptically questions Adi. Its ''about a month'' until Adi's birthday. Adi and Toni go shopping at the [[Mercer Centre]]. Adi says "If I was really an adult baby" line.
+** Saturday - Mom cryptically questions Adi. Its ''about a month'' until Adi's birthday. Adi and Toni go shopping at the [[Mercer Centre]]. Adi says "If I was really an adult baby" line. Chapters 39-52.
-** Sunday - Garfield gets home. Big argument. Mom lays down the law, and admits she knows Adi's secret.
+** Sunday - Garfield gets home. Big argument. Mom lays down the law, and admits she knows Adi's secret. Chapters 53-58.
-*** Sorting out birthday presents; Mom asks Adi about the baby stuff she's seen, suggests some other things she could get like a mobile for her room. Adi embarrassed and angry. When triggered, she buys herself the mobile without thinking. - ''planned for Sunday; might actually have ended up being Monday''
+*** Sorting out birthday presents; Mom asks Adi about the baby stuff she's seen, suggests some other things she could get like a mobile for her room. Adi embarrassed and angry. When triggered, she buys herself the mobile without thinking. - ''planned for Sunday; might actually have ended up being Monday'' Chapters 57-58.
-** Monday - Foundation day at Moistville College. Garfield and Adi can't get over the previous day's argument. Adi meats Dean and learns his (first) name
+** Monday - Foundation day at Moistville College. Garfield and Adi can't get over the previous day's argument. Adi meats Dean and learns his (first) name. Chapters 59-80.
 * Second Week
 ** Tuesday - Adi goes to stay with Toni, finds out that Britney thinks she wants to be a baby

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 ==First Act==
 * First week
-** Tuesday night - listens to the file, first test
+** Tuesday night - listens to the file, first test. Chapters 1-9.
 ** Wednesday - triggered by mom, then by Featherchase in school. Goes home with Toni
 ** Thursday - triggered by Toni's dad on speakerphone. Tells friends. Triggered by Belle. Evening, gets book list from Brit and asks Mom to call her adi

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 *** Discussion of pets
 *** Adi realises Belle is Lillibel, says it without thinking. Belle returns the favour and turns her to a complete baby, and then calls Dean to pick them up.
-** '''Saturday''': [c266] Adi grabs a cat toy and uses it to turn off power to the baby monitor so she can escape triggering. Belle is staying over, and triggers her instead.
+* '''Saturday''': [c266] Adi grabs a cat toy and uses it to turn off power to the baby monitor so she can escape triggering. Belle is staying over, and triggers her instead.
-** '''Sunday''': [c267-268] Morning. Adi manages to reach her keyboard, sends Toni an email with the safeword. But backs down a little, thinking it would be better to compromise, because stopping the baby thing entirely might offend Toni.
+* '''Sunday''': [c267-268] Morning. Adi manages to reach her keyboard, sends Toni an email with the safeword. But backs down a little, thinking it would be better to compromise, because stopping the baby thing entirely might offend Toni.
-** '''Monday''': [c269] Adi wakes up, feeling half little. At Toni's house now, doesn't realise that it's after her nap rather than in the morning.
+* '''Monday''': [c269] Adi wakes up, feeling half little. At Toni's house now, doesn't realise that it's after her nap rather than in the morning.
-*** Tries to go to the bathroom herself, a show of independence while she's not in a crib. Stumbles, wets, cries. Toni comforts her. Asks to not be a baby, but isn't clear.
+** Tries to go to the bathroom herself, a show of independence while she's not in a crib. Stumbles, wets, cries. Toni comforts her. Asks to not be a baby, but isn't clear.
-**** [c270] While Adi is watching TV, Toni calls Britney for advice. They decide to leave her with computer access as a little freedom. Confirmation that Adi's email to Toni didn't arrive.
+*** [c270] While Adi is watching TV, Toni calls Britney for advice. They decide to leave her with computer access as a little freedom. Confirmation that Adi's email to Toni didn't arrive.
-*** [c271] Adi wakes up in Toni's lap in front of the TV. Watch cartoons for a while, thinks Toni is going to let her be adult again. when she realises otherwise she tries to safeword, but still can't pronounce the word. Toni thinks it's baby babble and assumes she wants to be a full baby again. Interrupted before they can resolve the issue by Britney at the door.
+** [c271] Adi wakes up in Toni's lap in front of the TV. Watch cartoons for a while, thinks Toni is going to let her be adult again. when she realises otherwise she tries to safeword, but still can't pronounce the word. Toni thinks it's baby babble and assumes she wants to be a full baby again. Interrupted before they can resolve the issue by Britney at the door.
-*** [c272-275] Britney brings a new alarm clock with voice recording. Adi distracted by cute interesting object, until she gets regressed more.
+** [c272-275] Britney brings a new alarm clock with voice recording. Adi distracted by cute interesting object, until she gets regressed more.
-** '''Tuesday''': [c276-277] Adi woken up by her clock for the first time. In the afternoon there's a Geography exam. Knows that all she needs is a bare pass, so she lets herself regress and write silly answers for the questions she doesn't know. Says she doesn't need triggering, and then regresses anyway because the exam ended. Tells Britney about some of the answers at some point, and gets a giant plush tiger as a reward because her silly answers gave Brit a laugh.
+* '''Tuesday''': [c276-277] Adi woken up by her clock for the first time. In the afternoon there's a Geography exam. Knows that all she needs is a bare pass, so she lets herself regress and write silly answers for the questions she doesn't know. Says she doesn't need triggering, and then regresses anyway because the exam ended. Tells Britney about some of the answers at some point, and gets a giant plush tiger as a reward because her silly answers gave Brit a laugh.
-*** Triggered to wet by the teacher
+** Triggered to wet by the teacher
-** '''Wednesday''' [c278-279] Woken by the alarm again. Straight to babyhood.
+* '''Wednesday''' [c278-279] Woken by the alarm again. Straight to babyhood.
-*** Afternoon - slowly regaining awareness while "playing" a video game. Eventually realises her controller isn't connected. Toni worries a little that when they tell her to be adult, Adi is returning slowly.
+** Afternoon - slowly regaining awareness while "playing" a video game. Eventually realises her controller isn't connected. Toni worries a little that when they tell her to be adult, Adi is returning slowly.
-*** Play the maths revision game again
+** Play the maths revision game again
-** [c280-282] '''Thursday''' Dean wakes Adi up. She's feeling babyish, finding it hard to talk
+* [c280-282] '''Thursday''' Dean wakes Adi up. She's feeling babyish, finding it hard to talk
-*** Dean/Brit are a little worried. It's thursday afternoon and she's got a literature exam in an hour, and she's not coming back to adult.
+** Dean/Brit are a little worried. It's thursday afternoon and she's got a literature exam in an hour, and she's not coming back to adult.
-*** Revealed that she listened to the file during her pre-lunch nap (this is the first time Adi realises that's been happening); Britney didn't want to skip it because she thinks Adi is likely to panic during the exam this afternoon
+** Revealed that she listened to the file during her pre-lunch nap (this is the first time Adi realises that's been happening); Britney didn't want to skip it because she thinks Adi is likely to panic during the exam this afternoon
-*** Gets adult again once someone tells her it's time for the exam, because that was the trigger (they didn't realise she didn't know)
+** Gets adult again once someone tells her it's time for the exam, because that was the trigger (they didn't realise she didn't know)
-*** Needs to pee during an exam, but is embarrassed to ask to be excused, so allows herself to wet deliberately.
+** Needs to pee during an exam, but is embarrassed to ask to be excused, so allows herself to wet deliberately.
-**** First suggestion that she might be losing bladder control because she hasn't been able to hold it in a week.
+*** First suggestion that she might be losing bladder control because she hasn't been able to hold it in a week.
-** [c283-285] '''Friday''' Adi wakes up early, manages to send a message to [[../Locke|Locke]] on [[Critical Mass]] explaining why she's been away. Tried to send Toni another email, but someone hears her moving.
+* [c283-285] '''Friday''' Adi wakes up early, manages to send a message to [[../Locke|Locke]] on [[Critical Mass]] explaining why she's been away. Tried to send Toni another email, but someone hears her moving.
-*** Maths exam. Belle has trouble, Adi less so. Adi wets herself, realises her bladder's getting weaker.
+** Maths exam. Belle has trouble, Adi less so. Adi wets herself, realises her bladder's getting weaker.
-*** Adi speaks to Belle after the exam, asks her to pass on the message to Brit/Toni
+** Adi speaks to Belle after the exam, asks her to pass on the message to Brit/Toni
-*** Adi self-triggers as soon as she gets to the car
+** Adi self-triggers as soon as she gets to the car
-** '''Saturday''' [c293-294] Toni, Dean, and Belle chat while Adi is napping.
+* '''Saturday''' [c293-294] Toni, Dean, and Belle chat while Adi is napping.
-*** Confirm that the messages they received agree - Adi wants to lose potty training and doesn't want to be asked if she's sure again.
+** Confirm that the messages they received agree - Adi wants to lose potty training and doesn't want to be asked if she's sure again.
-*** They think Adi's worrying about it when she's adult, and wants to be adult less so she doesn't notice
+** They think Adi's worrying about it when she's adult, and wants to be adult less so she doesn't notice
-** '''Sunday''' [c295-296] Adi wakes up at Toni's house. Checks CritMass and starts rereading her older reviews
+* '''Sunday''' [c295-296] Adi wakes up at Toni's house. Checks CritMass and starts rereading her older reviews
-*** Adi realises she sounds like an idiot in the older messages, starts doubting herself, but thinks the later messages will be better
+** Adi realises she sounds like an idiot in the older messages, starts doubting herself, but thinks the later messages will be better
-*** Wets herself, triggered by Toni to stop worrying about it. Implied this will be the usual response from now on
+** Wets herself, triggered by Toni to stop worrying about it. Implied this will be the usual response from now on
 ==Exam Period (planned)==
-* Unsorted events - haven't decided how to spread these over different days yet. Some of these already written, but could be changed
+* Dean asks to see the 'note' that Adi gave Nyx, and speaks to Britney about her CritMass posts.
 ==Summer (planned)==

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 **** First suggestion that she might be losing bladder control because she hasn't been able to hold it in a week.
 ** [c283-285] '''Friday''' Adi wakes up early, manages to send a message to [[../Locke|Locke]] on [[Critical Mass]] explaining why she's been away. Tried to send Toni another email, but someone hears her moving.
 ==Exam Period (planned)==

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 *** Needs to pee during an exam, but is embarrassed to ask to be excused, so allows herself to wet deliberately.
 **** First suggestion that she might be losing bladder control because she hasn't been able to hold it in a week.
 ==Exam Period (planned)==
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 * Most mornings Adi wakes up adult, but whoever's looking after her will always come in to trigger her before she can persuade them that she really doesn't want this.
 ** Tries a few times to email the safeword when she gets a chance. Either emails Toni (who won't get it) or is interrupted.
-** One morning she gets a notification email from a site she used to post on, and she looks back at all her horrible, bitchy reviews that she thought were so funny when she didn't believe in hypnosis.
+** Responding to messages on CritMass she looks back at all her horrible, bitchy reviews that she thought were so funny when she didn't believe in hypnosis.
 *** Dean comes in and discovers that he's read her work in the past. Later asks to see the 'note' that Adi gave Nyx.

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-====First Act====
+This is the timeline for [[../]]. These are the main events, in roughly the order they happened. If anyone else is willing to help me make sure that this matches the actual story, please let me know (or just start editing). I'm putting in chapter numbers so that I can easily find bits I want to refer to in future, but any help with adding them would be appreciated.
 * First week
 ** Tuesday night - listens to the file, first test
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 ** Lets Toni trigger her again, and finds that maybe it's a little fun
 ** Voluntarily wets herself once, before she's an adult
 * BIRTHDAY!
 ** Gets a selection of birthday age badges. So she can have a party with her friends and celebrate being technically an adult, with booze and stuff. But if she wants to play as a baby, she can just change her badge, and they'll treat her as a younger age. No triggering unless she chooses to wear a diaper again, or gets out the 'special' tshirt Toni bought her.
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 * for the rest of the week she's triggered several times a day, and pushed to add more baby behaviours to let her 'family' keep her regressed
-====Extra Parts====
+===Extra Parts===
 * Bits added so it doesn't seem cruel to have Adi being a baby for so long. It didn't happen quite like I planned, so would appreciate if anyone can edit this section to tidy it up
 ** Garfield's being a jerk again, "when you get back to your girlfriend's" trigger
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 * Belle asks if Adi has a cat. Situation explained. Suggests a kitten as a reward for the babies if they do well in their exams.
-====Exam Period====
+==Exam Period==
-* Adi asks if she can be a complete baby after the exams.
+* '''Thursday:'''. Adi asks if she can be a complete baby after the exams.
 ** Explicitly says she doesn't want the choice, so she won't end up feeling guilty about how much Toni is doing for her.
 ** Thinks she's asked to be an adult for the suration of the exam period and a baby after, but Toni interprets it as being adult while sitting the exams, and a baby as soon as each exam finishes
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 ** Adi has trouble due to stress, wets and regresses, and then can treat it more like a game
 ** Toni & Nyx meet her right after the exam, messes and regresses
-* second exam
+* '''Friday:'''
-** The following afternoon
+** [c262] Morning: Wakes up and gets triggered right away. Complete baby, confused.
-** Easier; Adi finishes a little early
+** [c263] Second exam this afternoon. Toni will give Adi a ride in on her buke.
-====Exam Period (planned)====
+==Exam Period (planned)==
 * Unsorted events - haven't decided how to spread these over different days yet. Some of these already written, but could be changed
 ** Adi wets when a teacher says her name while bringing extra paper
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 *** Dean comes in and discovers that he's read her work in the past. Later asks to see the 'note' that Adi gave Nyx.
-====Summer (planned)====
+==Summer (planned)==
 * Over the summer, Adi can be a baby almost as much as she wants, until the college year starts.
 * Not allowed any real adult time; a few escape attempts, or trying to be an adult, but always caught and triggered.
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 **** Conversation; explanation.
-====Flashback (planned)====
+==Flashback (planned)==
 * Start with the kidnapping scene again, Adi getting her phone taken away.
 * Adi's being awkward and uncooperative.
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 ** Mom, Toni, and everyone come to the door. Dean asks Adi before answering if she feels confident speaking to them yet; and she says she's scared about having put them through too much
-====Final Act (planned)====
+==Final Act (planned)==
 * Adi tells everyone that she's mostly potty trained again, and after their attempt she's pretty certain that the old trigger no longer works.
 * They have a little discussion about how they managed to misunderstand so much, and conclude it was nobody's fault.