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 ** Graveller Road - near Adi's house, winding road that goes between quarries and factories. Stops as Duzcheburg Station.
-* [[/Moistville/]] - a short train ride from Duzcheburg; if Adi is still living at home she'd have to get Mom to drive her to the station every morning.
+* [[Moistville]] - a short train ride from Duzcheburg; if Adi is still living at home she'd have to get Mom to drive her to the station every morning.
-** [[/Moistville College/]] - Dean is a student there, and Adi is applying. First mentioned in chapter 36
+** See the page for further details
-*** Parts of the college map are colour coded, and the signposts (many of them built into fountains or sculptures) are mostly colour coded. The area around Zahl Building is buttercup yellow.
+** [[Moistville University]] - Dean is a student there, and Adi is applying. First mentioned in chapter 36
 * [[/K-World/]] - A theme park that takes an hour or two to drive to; the nearest one to Duzcheburg.

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	This version is the story of an almost-adult girl (who may be adult before the story ends). Kitty Angel is writing it without any proper planning, experimenting with the half-improvised style that seems to be popular on Wattpad, and with posting one or more chapters every day.		This version is the story of an almost-adult girl (who may be adult before the story ends). Kitty Angel is writing it without any proper planning, experimenting with the half-improvised style that seems to be popular on Wattpad, and with posting one or more chapters every day.
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		+	On Wattpad, the story is broken up into 3 volumes because of the 200-chapter limit. It is divided into books of 200 chapters each.
		+	The print and Kindle versions will be similarly broken up, although the breaks will occur around chapters 166 and 340.
		+	The titles of the 3 volumes are:
		+	# Hypnosis Doesn't Work Like That!
		+	# Hypnosis ''Still'' Doesn't Work Like That!
		+	# Hypnosis Won't Change Me Like That!!

	===Characters:===		===Characters:===

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 *** [[/Sherwood Goldings/]] - nee Walker. Toni's cousin; not sure who his father is. When he married bf Alan Dale, there was some dispute between the families about which name they should take. They settled it by making up a new surname, which is some kind of private (possibly dirty) joke between them
 ** [[/Uncle Vladislaus/]] - mentioned in chapter 244
 ** [[/Casey Dibble/]] - a biker friend, brother of Jack. Known to supply drugs
 *** [[/Riley Kwyn/]] - Casey's partner, and Toni's friend
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 ** [[/Professor Beach/]] - Head of the media sciences faculty
 ** [[/Professor Firestone/]] - First name Amidala. Tall, dark hair. Speaks very deliberately with a trace of a French accent. Honorary professor as she doesn't technically have a role in an academic department. Responsible for the intake of students with special needs. Refers to Adi as "Miss Spenser" when they first meet. Quite formal.
 ====Cameos====
 * [[Vicky Bracewell]] and her husband [[Reg Bracewell|Reg]] - local ABDL couple

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 ** [[/Mr Kibblesmith/]] - Geography teacher. Addresses students as "You" and points rather than learning their names
 ** [[/Mrs Ivanovic/]] - Known to use the school's courtyards for a crafty cigarette between lessons
-* [[/Dean Carter/]] - Possible romantic lead, if the story gets that far. A student at the college Adi wants to go to. First appears in chapter 36, though not named until chapter 69.
+* [[/Dean Carter/]] - Possible romantic lead, if the story gets that far. A student at the college Adi wants to go to. First mentioned (though not by name) in chapter 33, first appears in chapter 36, and first named in chapter 69.
 ** [[/Belle Carter/]] - Popular girl, queen bitch. Not clear if she's really the bully Adi thinks of her as. Captain of the volleyball team. Calls Adi "Juniper", which Adi thinks is mocking. First appears in chapter 1.
 * [[/Lady Larsen/]] - The hypnotist who made the files. May possibly be the same Lars mentioned in the Big Little Bus, adopting a female pseudonym.

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 ===Characters:===
 * POV character: [[/Adi|Adelaide Juniper Spenser]] - Mostly known as Adi. Has also been Adele, Della, or other variations at different times in her life. Huge ego, thinks she's smarter than everyone else. Never learns anything because she's so sure she knows better than everyone; falling behind in school. First appears in chapter 1.
-** [[/Garfield/]] - Adi's brother (or half-brother?). More successful, and starts the story on a foreign holiday with his father. First mentioned in chapter 12; first appears in chapter 53.
+** [[/Garfield/]] - Adi's brother (or half-brother?). Usually called Garf. More successful, and starts the story on a foreign holiday with his father. First mentioned in chapter 12; first appears in chapter 53.
 *** [[/Jack Dibble/]] - Garfield's friend and later boyfriend
 *** [[/Caitlyn Flood/]] - an older friend, and the one who gets them in trouble most often

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 * [[/K-World/]] - A theme park that takes an hour or two to drive to; the nearest one to Duzcheburg.
-* Online
+* Kolechia - A foreign nation (foreign in the sense of being a different fictional country from the one in which the main story takes place) in which Belle and Dean own a remote cottage that once belonged to their great-grandfather; they used to go there trying to fix it up. Native language: Kolechian (written Kolechian uses the Cyrillic alphabet, so perhaps it is Russia-adjacent).
 ** [[CritMass]] - AKA Critical Mass, a criticism website that Adi, Dean and Britney are all on, under aliases. First mentioned in chapter 2.
 ** Leonard Juiban High School's website

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 ===Characters:===
-* POV character: [[/Adi|Adelaide Juniper Spenser]] - Mostly known as Adi. Has also been Adele, Della, or other variations at different times in her life. Huge ego, thinks she's smarter than everyone else. Never learns anything because she's so sure she knows better than everyone; falling behind in school.
+* POV character: [[/Adi|Adelaide Juniper Spenser]] - Mostly known as Adi. Has also been Adele, Della, or other variations at different times in her life. Huge ego, thinks she's smarter than everyone else. Never learns anything because she's so sure she knows better than everyone; falling behind in school. First appears in chapter 1.
-** [[/Garfield/]] - Adi's brother (or half-brother?). More successful, and starts the story on a foreign holiday with his father.
+** [[/Garfield/]] - Adi's brother (or half-brother?). More successful, and starts the story on a foreign holiday with his father. First mentioned in chapter 12; first appears in chapter 53.
 *** [[/Jack Dibble/]] - Garfield's friend and later boyfriend
 *** [[/Caitlyn Flood/]] - an older friend, and the one who gets them in trouble most often
-** [[/Mom|Adi's mom]] (Nyxoriña Spenser) - somewhat absent-minded. Works long hours, tries to be her daughter's friend but has no idea how to talk to her. Does a really good breakfast.
+** [[/Mom|Adi's mom]] (Nyxoriña Spenser) - somewhat absent-minded. Works long hours, tries to be her daughter's friend but has no idea how to talk to her. Does a really good breakfast. First mentioned in chapter 1; first appears in chapter 4.
 *** '''Grandma Jacobs''' - Adi's grandmother, presumably Nyx's mother. Died when Adi was young. Used to call her "Addykins".
 *** '''Uncle Berenstein''' - Nyx's brother. They used to argue a lot. Mentioned in chapter 56
 * '''Mr Bøzinger''' - Nyx's boss at one of her jobs.
-* [[/Britney Wakefield/]] - One of Adi's best friends. Cheerful bubbly goth. Wears goth clothes, acts like a stereotypical goth, but is really a lot smarter than anyone realises, especially Adi.
+* [[/Britney Wakefield/]] - One of Adi's best friends. Cheerful bubbly goth. Wears goth clothes, acts like a stereotypical goth, but is really a lot smarter than anyone realises, especially Adi. First mentioned in chapter 2; first appears in chapter 3.
 ** Lucretia (Lucie) and Sasha – two of Britney's goth friends (chapter 351)
 * [[/Toni Walker/]] - Muscular tomboy with a crush on Adi. Britney's "sidekick" (Adi doesn't get this in-joke, and it drives her nuts), and third member of the group of friends at the start of the book. Has an epi-pen in her bag; Britney and Adi have taken a class on how top use it, possibly some other friends too.
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 * Teachers
 ** [[/Miss Featherchase/]] - Adi's literature teacher. Old fashioned, super strict, and not open to new ideas. Refers to students by full name. Nose looks like a beak, and her shriek of anger sounds almost like an eagle. Toni refers to her as "Leatherface".
-** [[/Miss Catterton/]] - Maths teacher. One of the younger teachers, has some respect from her students. Approaches them like friends until they break the rules
+** [[/Miss Catterton/]] - Maths teacher. One of the younger teachers, has some respect from her students. Approaches them like friends until they break the rules. First mentioned in chapter 6.
 ** [[/Mr Kibblesmith/]] - Geography teacher. Addresses students as "You" and points rather than learning their names
 ** [[/Mrs Ivanovic/]] - Known to use the school's courtyards for a crafty cigarette between lessons
 * [[/Dean Carter/]] - Possible romantic lead, if the story gets that far. A student at the college Adi wants to go to.
-** [[/Belle Carter/]] - Popular girl, queen bitch. Not clear if she's really the bully Adi thinks of her as. Captain of the volleyball team. Calls Adi "Juniper", which Adi thinks is mocking.
+** [[/Belle Carter/]] - Popular girl, queen bitch. Not clear if she's really the bully Adi thinks of her as. Captain of the volleyball team. Calls Adi "Juniper", which Adi thinks is mocking. First appears in chapter 1.
 * [[/Lady Larsen/]] - The hypnotist who made the files. May possibly be the same Lars mentioned in the Big Little Bus, adopting a female pseudonym.
 * [[/Claire Keating/]] - A student at Juiban High, mentioned chapter 277. Says she's going to be a TV weatherman. Good at geography; did a group project with Adi and Britney.